Lyric Revision: Hard Part Is Over

Over the course of the past few weeks, I revisited the lyric entitled, 'Hard Part Is Over,' and soon, I began to feel something was amiss. Somehow, it didn't evoke the depth of feeling, of passion, that it should. I mean, the song is about finally discovering your soul mate after years of fruitless searching. Anyhow, I finally found the time and courage to dive in and make some changes! I hope they were for the better! Please let me know with your feedback. Take care...